nogimmicks: (Upset ✥ It's too late.)
V. LILA F. ([personal profile] nogimmicks) wrote in [community profile] piratejournal 2013-10-13 03:57 am (UTC)

[written; kind of way after the others, jsyk]

[ Because she's been in bed. She's exhausted. It's funny, for a half-youkai, she shouldn't be so tired from using those reserves of hers to rescue Yu, but... ]

I think you failed a little here I can see this but you probably already know that since I just got to it

[ She's playing innocent mostly because she doesn't see what's WRONG with what they did, except that Yu got hurt, which honestly wasn't part of HER plans.

And if her writing is a little bad, it's because she's tired, oops. ]


I dont know what happened but I tried to help he wasnt supposed to get hurt im sorry

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