cherrybombpie: (it's time to go)
( 九能 小太刀 ) • Kuno Kodachi ([personal profile] cherrybombpie) wrote in [community profile] piratejournal 2014-10-03 04:54 pm (UTC)

written;

[This comes back to him:]

Deer Dear journal:

The crazy old hag BEAUTIFUL AND BENEVOLENT YOUNG LADY is making me write journal entrees entries every day so I am writing a journal entry. I asked the peeple people on the journal how to write better and everyone told me the same thing so they arent helpfull aren't helpful at all. I want to go home. The End.

Notes:
A deer is an animal. Unless the journal is an animal, you should be putting "dear" instead.

If they're going to be this short, write at least two a day, or one that's twice as long.

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